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November 28, 2012
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Make
EASTMAN KODAK COMPANY
Model
KODAK EASYSHARE C195 Digital Camera
Shutter Speed
1/161 second
Aperture
F/5.9
Focal Length
30 mm
ISO Speed
64
Date Taken
Sep 20, 2012, 5:09:48 AM
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to achieve calmness
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:iconwisdomsson:
Very nice and peaceful feel to the picture however there are a few things I can point out in order to help you get a better photo next time. One the framing of the picture also known as the cropping on the top is right in the middle of two trees. You never want to really cut something in half like that because it ruins the lines of the photo. I know the water was the main focus and I understand you wanted to get the main body of water more then anything. That's fine but you have to be careful that you don't get so focused on the main subject of the photo that it causes you to miss whats going on around the main subject. For this photo all you had to do was back up one or two steps and it would change a good photo to a great photo. If you have an editing program like adobe lightroom I would recommend increasing the vibrancy and clarity levels this would give more detail in the blades of grass and make the photo look cleaner. You did a good job keep up the good work and keep shooting just watch out for getting that photographers version of tunnel vision. Always check the borders of the photo before shooting. :)
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musiclover2019 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Student General Artist
This is a very calm picture, and I'd look at it for hours. :)
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cms-star Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013
aw, thanks so much!! :D
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Wisdomsson Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Professional Photographer
very pretty
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MyNameisKudos Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Student Photographer
I love the leading line in the picture. Pulls my eye straight to the water
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cms-star Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012
thanks!!
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MyNameisKudos Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Student Photographer
welcome
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